diff --git a/documentation/Slides/11-12-2018/audience-define-user_personal_young.txt b/documentation/Slides/11-12-2018/audience-define-user_personal_young.txt
index 6cb1d008..1789f606 100644
--- a/documentation/Slides/11-12-2018/audience-define-user_personal_young.txt
+++ b/documentation/Slides/11-12-2018/audience-define-user_personal_young.txt
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ User: Personal: Young
 
 Define
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-	Feel embarrassed when asked to read out load in class.
+	Feel embarrassed when asked to read out loud in class.
 	You do not understand your reading assignments. 
 	
 	You struggle with reading.
@@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ Define
 	This makes you feel stupid. 
 	This makes you feel like you are not good enough.
 
-	This is not your fault.	
-	70% of US population is not proficient in reading.
+	It’s not your fault.	
+	70% of the US population is not proficient in reading.
 	Typographic factors have been found to impact reading.
-	With Lexend fonts, you can change your text to your individual, personal, needs.
+	With Lexend fonts, you can change your text to your individual, personal needs.
 
 	If you want to be accepted into college.
 	If you want to earn a degree and find a good job.
@@ -41,4 +41,4 @@ CTA
 	• Where to find Fonts
 	• How to Install Fonts
 	• How to Load Fonts
-	• How to Adjust Fonts [Variable vs. Static Fonts]
\ No newline at end of file
+	• How to Adjust Fonts [Variable vs. Static Fonts]